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This page....ahhh....what to say about this page.... :iconthinkplz: It. Was. So. Easy. To. Create. :iconfaceplamplz:

-laugh nervously- I know I know...I should've put more effort into it, but this IS how I intended the Opening Scene to close. Chapter One of YU|GL--Yasashii Uso | Gentle Lie--has finally begun! I'm sorry if any of you thought that the last few pages was the start of chapter one...I'm sure I brought it up a ba-jillion times that it's just the opening scene that leads us all to the truths of what happened to Rayne and other nonsenses that will also be later explained. I also got tired of typing out the ENTIRE title name in Japanese and English, please bare with me on this. :iconotzplz:

Well anywayyyyyy, I'll be working on the title page for Chapter One and the first page for Chapter One. Stay tuned for page 006 of YU|GL!! :squee:

Chapter One Title Cover and Page 006 of Yasashii Uso | Gentle Lie will be out in a few days. I promise! It'll be a while so please wait patiently. I will also put in the link(s) once it is done and uploaded onto deviantART.

! ! NOTICE: PLEASE RESPECT MY ARTWORK(S) AND PLEASE DO NOT CLAIM THEM AS YOUR OWN. THANK YOU. ! !

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K-A-R-L Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
From what I've read from the manga, it seems really well written!! (:
I also love how much effort you've put into detail into each panel. It's fantastic!! :iconadorableplz:
I'm looking forward to seeing more of this!!
Keep up with the awesome work!!! ^_^ (Sorry if I've written a lot!! >.<)
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Aleius Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconshockplz: Ohmygawd. .( O A O ). ~ ! ! ! ! ! Awhhh geeeee, thank you so much for the compliments and your honesty!! :icondragonhugplz:

You didn't write a lot! Don't you worry (I actually like it when people write a lot^^' huhuhu--I love writing). You're so adorableeeeeeee. :iconsoadoarableplz: Those are the same words you will forever hear from me whenever we chit-chat. :iconomgsocuteplz: And I will make sure to keep doing my best with my manga~!!
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K-A-R-L Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You are very welcome!! You like it when people
write a lot? Then from now, I shall start to create longer
sentences even if I do drag on for a long time and it stops being
relevant to the specific topic!! Haha!! (That was awful I apologise :iconsadfaceplz: )

And with those nice compliments of yours, YOU ARE MAKING ME BLUSH LIKE A CHILLI PEPPER!! :iconblushplz:
But I must say, Thank youuuu!!! <3
And with your manga, I think you will continue to do great!! I'm looking forward to seeing more!! ^_^
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Aleius Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha xDD :iconlaughingplz: Sure, go for it! I guess add-in anything to extend your sentences. Just make sure your sentences aren't dependent clauses. x'D You're fineeeeee ~ :iconpetplz:

LOL--A chili pepper?? Out of all things to think of? Haha, you dork. I LOVEEEEE chili peppers by-the-way. Spicy food is the bomb. Like literally!! THE. BOMB. :iconmonkeybombplz:

Awhhh of course, you are truly welcomed and I will!^^
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K-A-R-L Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's "MR Dork" to you missy!!! :iconreaction2plz:
But yeah, chilli peppers and spicy food are so gooood!!! ^_^
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shinyjade17 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
:iconnosebleedingplz:
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Aleius Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconnosebleedingplz::iconotzplz: I-I'm going to have to clean up all the blood from your nosebleed... xD
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shinyjade17 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
:iconblushplz: Sorry I just can't help it, it happens evertime I experience something awesome!
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Aleius Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha you're so funny. x'D
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shinyjade17 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
Naaaaah this is just my natural reaction to things that are awesome~ ":iconmonkeyloveplz:
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SeleHearts Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AWW MII SAMA I LOVE IT!!!!!
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Aleius Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nyaaa arigatou Hei channnnnn ~ :heart:
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Akane-chii Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Student General Artist
But you know it is still amazing!And please can you give me some tipes to draw manga comic?:-)
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Aleius Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course I can give some tips. :iconwinkingplz:

First of all, before creating a manga, you want to know who the main character(s) are. Most of the characters should always be established before adding more detail to the storyline. Don't worry about creating ALL the characters at the moment, just worry about creating SOME of the characters. Preferably the characters you would like to introduce to the audience (A.K.A. you readers) from the beginning of your story/manga.

Second, after creating the desired characters you want to introduce to your audience/readers ask yourself these questions:

- WHAT is the main cause to all of the events happening, or the events that are going to happen??

- WHY are the events happening?? Is it from jealousy, a family curse, something extraordinary, cheating??

And lastly; the most important of all, WHAT IS THE MAIN PLOT/SUMMARY of your story/manga?? Here is an example:

In Dragon Ball Z (DBZ) the MAIN PLOT is to retrieve all the dragon balls before the bad guys can to restore world peace.


:iconsleepyplz: These are a few tips I like to use to keep myself from straying off from my storyline. Creating a short table of the main plot, main characters, and etc. helps a lot too! I create mine in Microsoft Word, including brief short sentences under each to help me remember what leads to what or who goes where.

EXAMPLE:

MAIN CHARACTER(S):
Xaivier Ogata
- Is a detective and police trying to solve the death cases
- Befriends Hibiki Ito by coincidence


Something like that. :iconunsureplz: I hope you understand what I 'm trying to say. //shot :iconotlplz:
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Akane-chii Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you so much!I really do understand what do you mean, I will practise.:-)Again thank you!:-
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Aleius Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem m'deary.(:
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